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Cracking your knuckles against my teeth
And singing silly love songs to insomnia
Roses are red,
Lobelias are blue,
Conjunctions are just sighs
Sped up to you
Hello again.
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EbolaBears Featured By Owner May 19, 2013
That first line is hawt!:iconflyingheartsplz:
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Birdkiller Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Professional Writer
I think you should have kept the six word stanza. It was different, but it drew me in and I liked it.

Also, thank you for favoriting my six word story. I'll will write more and I will write better because of you.
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StarryMary Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome.
And I have to admit, the six word stanza grew to by my favorite.
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MirrandaGrey Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013
Thank you man!
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viralcode666 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013
nice.
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