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Humanity as we know it was unwanted from the start

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Crystal clear charcoal
Chokes my skin
For I was once a concubine of heaven;
But Hell drifted me away
And we gave each other a millennium of passion
So great, my once silver vines turned up in flames
And shook the ground beneath my cement foundation

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I created a lovechild so magnificent,
That they would both fight for them for eons to come
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Well, honestly guys, this one I found to be interesting for me. I really liked the metaphors I used, thought they were a little something special.
So what did you guys think about it?
What do you think it means? Does this remind you of a poem, prose, quote, or any other things?

Simply share your thoughts.
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AutumnPocky's avatar
This is beautiful. Makes me think about life the universe and... and everything. *_*